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No workshops. No templates. La Luce Literary helps clients identify their strengths, plan their writing, find their unique voice, and produce exceptional essays on demand. Video interview coaching is also available. Process is guided by inquiry and completely personalized. 20+ years of experience in college essay building. 

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What Clients Are Saying:

“I got into Berkeley and UCLA…the hardest decision was which to choose!” Matthew G.

“Thanks to Lisa’s consulting my daughter was admitted to her dream school.” Sandra Y.​

“I couldn’t have done it without La Luce. Lisa helped me find my voice and show the colleges who I truly am. I’m more than just test scores and grades.” Ashton

“Lisa is incredibly thoughtful and attentive in her work. Sessions with her were always comforting and effortless. She understood exactly what I was trying to say and helped me express it in an incredible way. Without her guidance, my essays wouldn’t have been nearly as powerful and concise. Thanks to her support, I got into the school I’ve dreamed of attending since 7th grade.”  Courtlyn H.

“Until I worked with La Luce I didn’t know how to start my essays. I was planning on just answering the prompts. Thank you so much for showing me how to make it my own and say what I really wanted to say. I got into my top school, Boston University, because of your guidance. You’re amazing!” Elise Y. 

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“Lisa helped my daughter so much and because of her assistance my daughter got into her favorite schools. She will be heading to NYU this fall, and I believe it’s because of  Lisa’s expert advice in helping young people write stellar college essays. I cannot thank her enough.”   Faith M.

“John really didn’t have the grades we wanted him to have, but we thought that his story might help him to get in to a good school. We found Lisa through some friends and it has made all of the difference. He wrote a great set of essays and got into some of his dream schools. I’m still beside myself. Thank you, Lisa.” Thomas Y.

“I don’t think my friends realize how much the essay matters. I was able to get into four UC Schools (UCLA, Berkeley, UCI, and Davis) because of my essays. My GPA isn’t amazing (4.1) but I got in over some of my friends who had better grades! I’m sure it’s because of the help I got from Lisa. Thank you for helping me! I can’t wait to start at UCLA this fall.”   Deborah S.

“Thank you so much for making me believe in myself and see that I had a story. I never thought I had anything to say but now I see the value of writing a good essay. Berkeley, here I come.” Matthew C.

“I’m so glad I had my son work with Lisa. She’s exactly what he needed while going through this process. She cares about her client– it’s not just about the money. My son got into some great schools because of his essay, and more importantly, he felt better about himself after working with her. I cannot express my gratitude enough.” Gloria R. 

Students accepted to: Barnard, Vassar, Wesleyan, NYU, Boston College, Boston University, USC, UCLA, UC Berkeley, UCI, among others (2024-current)

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La Luce Salone is a once a month meet up for Creatives of all types. We meet locally and discuss our projects. Email for details.

Indie Publishing

La Luce Literary has published a handful of literary works: Basta (a novel by Lucia Maz), A Tiny Existence (a chapbook by Lucia Maz), and Rooted (a poetry collection). We are in the process of making Rooted available for purchase online.

The holidays are over, but college essay season is not, as many of the supplemental essays are due on January 15th for regular decision and others aren’t due until late spring. The rule of thumb is: the more competitive the college, the earlier the deadline.

This year marks my busiest year in regards to college consulting, and I can only assume this trend will continue. Statistics show that each year more and more students apply for college and most of them apply to the same top 20 schools. That being said, the application process is getting uber competitive. Will AI change this trend? It is too early to tell, but my thinking is that it will as some students will veer off of the college path and choose trades instead. But as of now, we are in full swing.

So now, more than ever, it’s important to have accurate information when it comes to applications. While many students are watching TikTok videos to glean information and learn the supposed tricks of admission, they are often times being mislead. I’ve had students tell me all sorts of dubious information about how to position yourself perfectly for a school or get in with a specific major. Some of the information is possible, but a lot of it is simply hearsay. Misinformation gets passed on from one student to another quite quickly and then it continues to spread until everyone has the wrong deadline for a school or other false information ranging from [insert school] doesn’t read essays or only accepts students from a specific racial group.

There is also a lot of misinformation in the parent communities as well. I’ve spoken with countless parents who are under the impression that their child has to volunteer one place, start a club on campus about something else, take up an obscure sport, and take all of the AP courses available. This too, is not accurate, and in fact, may hurt their chances of getting in as it looks like the student is simply going through the motions.

However, there are some trends that are consistent. Previously, completing a rigorous course load and maintaining a high GPA were enough to make a student stand out. If they had some community service or had started a club, it was a plus. Now, schools seem to want a student to have the grades and the coursework, but also a passion (something they adore and dedicate their time to outside of school, something that is philanthropic in nature but also tied to a specific interest).

Another change is the amount of energy schools are dedicating to analyzing the supplemental essays, rather than the Common App general essay. Many of the college admissions representatives have explained that they are weighing these supplementals heavier than the general essay because they have so many applicants and want to see that the student has “done their research” on the program they offer and know why they want to attend their university. This is a shift in that the general essay, being that it’s 650 words and has more breadth, used to be the main thing.

Lastly, the advent of AI has refocused what colleges are looking for in essays (both supplementals and the general) because they’ve found that students are using ChatGPT to help them write their essays (using it for organization or ideas) or plagiarizing their essay completely. Because of this, many admissions boards are focusing more on content and specific activities/programs, rather than creative writing ability or flow. This will be a continuously changing issue since machine learning will continue to accelerate and what it can do will grow exponentially. All of this to say, it more important than ever to get direction in this process and learn from those who know the system the best, specifically by getting help on the supplemental essay. It may be what tips the scale in your favor.

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